I think that what you wrote made a lot of sense.
But, what about this? suppose you were to create a killer headline? I mean, I don't wish to tell you how to run your blog, but suppose you added something to possibly get people's attention? I mean Gastenboek is a little plain. You could glance at Yahoo's front page and watch how they create news titles to get people to click.
You might add a related video or a related picture or two to get readers interested about what you've written. Just my opinion, it might make your blog a little livelier.
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